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04 March 2010
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very good german
Posted by: Will Smith | 11 March 2010 at 16:01
very good german
Posted by: connor | 11 March 2010 at 16:12
very good german
Posted by: connor | 11 March 2010 at 16:19
your aleain was good but it had no picture so people had no idea what it looked like...
Posted by: olivia cartwright | 12 March 2010 at 16:22
it was grea it had adverbs in so people thought it was good
Posted by: olivia cartwright | 12 March 2010 at 16:24
your alein was great it has lots of ideas on and it has lots of adverbs on it looks great
Posted by: olivia cartwright | 12 March 2010 at 16:26
Some good German Will, but needs some opinions and a picture of the alien you are describing. With opinions and connectives you would have received a higher level. This piece of work is level 3c, well done!
Posted by: DJ Otterburn | 12 March 2010 at 21:04